People frequently ask about the difference between that and which, and some situations can be puzzling. Use that when you are distingushing one from others similar to it. When you write, “I own the blue car that is parked out front,” you are...
On the TV news, a headline on the screen said, “Job growth grinds to a halt.” Why do so many things end by “grinding to a halt”? Or when they end suddenly, they always come to a “screeching halt.” In their impulse to be colorful, writers often reach for...
Verbs invigorate sentences and make writing lively and emphatic, but those action words often suffocate inside mushy nouns. We deprive ourselves of the chance to energize a sentence when we say They provided recommendations for improvements to our customer...
When you are making a persuasive appeal, your audience might be supportive or opposed, but what about people who simply don’t care? Influencing people who are indifferent and unmotivated requires different tactics. These are not always people you can ignore, because...
Jobs sometimes become tedious and boring when every day is the same, and that is also true with reading. When the writing offers no variation in sentence length, the repetition is monotonous. The simplest of sentence structures is tolerable in a children’s story: This...
Positioning information can be an important factor when you are trying to persuade
Praise from Clients
What a teacher you are. In your brief session, you taught me four valuable things.
Chet Burgerone of the pioneers of PR in America
Ken’s writing workshops received the highest evaluations of any training we’ve done in my five years here.
Kristi WilkinsSenior Director of Marketing CommunicationsPacific Gas & Electric
I am pleased to announce we will be modifying our press release format. The new format is in line with the recommendations of Ken O’Quinn, who has conducted the writing workshops for worldwide PR. While they may seem subtle, the changes are powerful when it comes to conveying a strong, clear message.
Kristin HollinsVice President of CommunicationsOracle
Ken gave one of the best courses I’ve ever taken. He teaches staff how to write properly, clearly and concisely, from e-mails to major planning documents.
Debby ArnoldManagerVisa International
Ken O’Quinn is the best writing coach I have ever worked with.
I learned more helpful tips than in any other writing course in the past 40 years. As an engineer, knowing the “why” is important.
David EiermanMotorola Solutions
The feedback from the 40+ communicators who participated in the workshops was overwhelmingly positive. He is passionate about good writing, and it is contagious when he presents. We’re already planning to have him back.
My team had some great feedback on the time they spent with you. They really learned a lot and you received rave reviews.
Susan LintonsmithVice President of CommunicationsRed Robin Gourmet Burgers
You are such an interesting, knowledgeable, and entertaining speaker. Feedback was uniformly enthusiastic.
Beth CookPresidentRichmond chapter of the National Investor Relations Institute
Participating in your course was one of my best experiences in the past few years. It was such a pleasure to be in a room full of people whose goal was to strengthen their writing, and you did a fantastic job of leading the class.